Hello and welcome back to my blog, I hope everyone is doing well. This week for writing our goal was to Use “show not tell” when appropriate. Our task was to refract some sentences and then refract a paragraph from our narrative writing. Here is my work:
Which sentence that I recrafted was your favourite?
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